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I wake up
To a forest.
I lay
On soft moss
Under a great tree.
The rain
Slowly stops
F
A
L
L
I
N
G
And mist
Rolls through
So slowly
Its as if
It were trying
Not to make
A sound...
©2003-2009 ~uniquenobody
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This is the last poem I wrote before falling asleep in the series. I love the last line.

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:icontanelorn:
Lovely.... I loved the picture...

It remembers me of my RPG games with my cousin... I love forests.

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:icontwinklj:
Very beautiful...

I feel as if I am dreaming.

Great work!

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Go find a cheerleader and saw her legs off.
:iconkasadeja:
And mist
Rolls through
So slowly
Its as if
It were trying
Not to make
A sound...

That is so incredible beautiful that I dunno what to say...

*Sigh*

I think I'll just close my eyes and let the images and the feelings sooth me.
I'll enjoy that for a little while... :) (Smile)
:icontimrkey:
And mist
Rolls through
So slowly
Its as if
It were trying
Not to make
A sound...

that is so awesome Laurel...I Heart it way much.

--
The Inseperable Trio
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-Popping pills just to keep pretending, take some more but it's almost empty. Looking back at the ones I've gone through, I can stop anytime I want to.-
:iconnottaprettygrrl:
simply beautiful.

--
ZOE
:iconladyindistress:
oooh, i like the last line too :)
:iconaptc55:
Excellent poem. Cool poetic effects. Great picture too

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